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writing job description in detail on front page of the resume is the common email writing mistake.
I think most of the mistakes are in the start, end and the grammer.
slang language use, improper greetings, no clear message or request, improper ending, lack of CC emails, lack of contact information.
Punctuation, grammer, not complete sentences, how to start? How to end?